Thursday, December 31, 2020

Covers, Covers and More Covers

So there was one thing that came out of that last review that I felt compelled to address. Romantic wrote:

To the author, please consider getting a professional cover done. The current one really doesn't do justice to the level of writing in this book.

Although this is a wonderful compliment about my writing, it's not the best compliment about my skills in terms of cover design. When I first started this journey, I tried making my own covers. That came to a screeching end very quickly (see here, here and here). 

In my defense, as a huge fan of Dick Francis, I was trying to mimick his style. They do look rudimentary and cheap though, so I'm glad I decided against using them long term.

It took me a while, but I found an online but when I found the ones I thought were professional, sophisticated and worthwhile, I invested in them, bought them, worked with the designer and rolled them out (see here).

These were far better, but they still lacked something. They looked too blank I realize now. Truthfully, even though Vapor Trail looks homemade, it was actually the most expensive one I bought. I never liked it though. It never truly represented the story. Romantic was correct.


Thanks to this comment by "Romantic" I went back and found a better cover for Vapor Trail (it's not easy by the way) and updated both the other two. I uploaded tag lines, provided some more flare. Now I'm far happier with them. I can live with these. Let's hope "Romantic," thinks the update is worthwhile.



Wednesday, December 30, 2020

Why Writer's Write

So this is why people write! I should get reviews more often. A few months ago I wrote about a review that I got online for one of my novels (see here) and then before that another one (see here). Those two were nothing compared to the two I just got over the winter holidays. I've updated my author page with all of my novels now, and it's fun to see the reviews coming in (see here).

The first one I got was for On the Edge (see here) from Michael Best:


The aspect that really hit me was two things he wrote. The first was about the ability to add depth and richness to the story. 

The author skillfully creates a clash of characters, though adding to the depth and richness of the story, it requires the reader to remain exceptionally engaged without missing a beat. Given the nature of the story, that is not hard to do.

The second quote discusses the allegorical quality applied to the story. Was I trying to do that? Yep. What's funny is that Vapor Trail has a far more sophisticated touch of that than On the Edge. 

Dick Hannah’s book has an allegorical quality to it, in that, Joe Malone is symbolic of today’s war vet and emblematic of the struggles to adapt to civilian life. Leaving the cruelty of war, expecting to find peace and acceptance, becomes an illusion upon return to civilian life for the MC, as is the case in the real world.

The second review was for Vapor Trail (see here) and it's just as fun to read, this one from someone named "Romantic:"



I have to say, it feels good to say that character development was so good. Thanks so much!

Mechanically well done, dialogue exceptional, plot believable and tense (in just the right places)...but for me, it was the character development that really shot this one through the roof.

It feels so good to be recognized for your craft. This must be why writers strive to keep producing. I can tell you this much, reviews like these make me want to write more!





Monday, December 21, 2020

Wishing for More from the Marlowe Murders

Some of my favorite stories to read are Agatha Christie whodunnits. There's nothing better than a well thought out, well-formed, compelling, well-thought-out mystery. Every now and then I'll put down the books or the work and I'll go get a copy of the ABC Murders, or Murder on the Mews, or Death on the Nile. I've read most of her stories, so most all the time nowadays I'm re-reading instead of reading. 

I was hoping for a story like that from Laura Giebfried's The Marlowe Murders (Alexandra Durant mystery Book 1). I was not pleasantly surprised. 


I found the pacing off, and the story disjoint and not fun to read. It was tough to care about what was going on and the characters seemed forced. I really wanted to like this book and there were undertones of writing that I hoped would pan out. Sadly, it didn't pan out. There were just enough oddly written phrases and too complex descriptions of setting and characters that I gave up halfway through. 

I'm sorry it wasn't a tad more tightly written because I feel like Laura could have had a remarkably good story. Sadly, it just wasn't this one this time. 

Saturday, December 19, 2020

Book Review of No Place for Mercy

I was eager to read No Place for Mercy by Brian G. Walsh because I've always been a fan of short stories, I grew up with Louis L'amour stories about Bowdrie (see here) and have read all of the short story anthologies of Alfred Hitchcock. Secondly, I've just published my own anthology of short stories and wanted to see how Walsh's stacked up to mine . . . . or mine stacked up to his.


They stack up well. 

Walsh has a way with words and phrasing. His analogies are vivid and compelling. His prose make the ready want to read on. This one about mistakes shaking you like a rag doll got me:

She smiled with nice, even white teeth, probably paid for by her pimp. A beautiful young girl, probably no more than 18. Some day she'd wake up and realize the true cost of making this life decision. She'd learn what Cleon had learned, that some mistakes never let go of you, they shake you like a rag doll until you break, but Cleon wasn't in a lecturing mood tonight.

A very good collection and I enjoyed it very much. 

Wednesday, December 16, 2020

Might Be Looking at Poetry Differently Going Forward

I took a moment to read Across the Room by Shannon Sonnenberg-Pietila and honestly I was quite happy that I did. I am not usually a reader who is attracted to nor am I consumer of poetry, but for Across the Room I might change my views. Simply put the poems are deep, worthwhile, and poignant. 

The title comes from the third poem in the book that might have been the one that hit me hardest. How many times have I seen that person who I wonder what they're thinking? Are they looking like I think they are? And worse is she looking back? How does that change my thoughts on my life? And that makes my thoughts go back to the first poem, the one that ends with the couple sitting on the couch, wondering who will push pause first. 

I read another review that said that the poems lacked polish, but I liked that lack of polish. It provided a harsher more realistic view of life, love, and relationships. It makes me look forward to other poems that might be coming to see how the poet grows, changes, evolves, and develops. 

I'm not by nature a love or poetry, but I loved this book. 

Monday, December 7, 2020

NaNo This Year

 I wrote a few days back about my NaNo journey this year (see here), and how even though I didn’t make it to 50K words, it was still a worthwhile effort in many ways. 

I was reading in Carol Roberts’ The Dissertation Journey the following passage:

You don’t have to write something good initially. Thinking that you do only causes self-disparagement and self-recrimination. Remember, first drafts are only first drafts and are for your eyes only. Let them be sketchy thoughts, rambling sentences, clumsy word patterns using poor grammar, and so on. Just get everything out of your brain and onto paper. Don’t obsess and ponder ideas too long. Don’t judge it, just write it. Getting ideas on paper gets you moving. You now have something to work on and revise. Accept the fact that you will be writing several drafts, and take the pressure off the first one by concentrating only on your ideas. Most writers agree that it’s easier to revise than to create. Writing is a complex and slow process, so don’t expect it to flow effortlessly. Few writers write only when they feel inspired. If you wait for inspiration, or write only when you feel like it, your chances of completion are nil.

Great advice and particularly good considering my own NaNo. Just because I ddin’t hit 50K doesn’t mean what I have written is no good or not worthy. Just wait till I get a chance to rewrite it!


Wednesday, December 2, 2020

A Column of Fire First

 Been a while sine I read for fun. I think the last several books I read for fun were almost a year ago. WEB Griffen books. Finished an entire series. Really enjoyed digging into some military thrillers. Now that my classes for the year are ostensibly done, and although I still have some homework on the schooling front, I'm taking a moment to catch my breath and read for pleasure. 

A couple of years ago someone gave me A Column of Fire by Ken Follett. I've always enjoyed Ken Follett books (see here). Little did I know that A Column of Fire was actually a second in a series about Medieval England and France. I read the first in the series over a decade ago, so it was nice to pick this up and realize I've already read the prequel. The Pillars of the Earth was actually the first Ken Follett book I ever picked up. Since then I've read most of his other books, I've actually read several books on writing where we studied Follett. Overall, A Column of Fire should be just the break I need. 


The first line wasn't especially enthralling, but it was a nice opening scene to create a setting and introduce characters.

Ned Willard came home to Kingsbridge in a snowstorm. 

He sailed upstream from Combe Harbour in the cabin of a slow barge loaded with cloth from Antwerp and wine from Bordeaux. When he reckoned the boat was at last nearing Kingsbridge he wrapped his French cloak more tightly around his shoulders, pulled the hood over his ears, stepped out onto the open deck, and looked ahead. 

At first he was disappointed: all he could see was falling snow. But his longing for a sight of the city was like an ache, and he stared into the flurries, hoping. After a while his wish was granted, and the storm began to lift. A surprise patch of blue sky appeared. Gazing over the tops of the surrounding trees, he saw the tower of the cathedral—four hundred and five feet high, as every Kingsbridge Grammar School pupil knew. The stone angel that watched over the city from the top of the spire had snow edging her wings today, turning the tips of her feathers from dove gray to bright white. As he looked, a momentary sunbeam struck the statue and gleamed off the snow, like a benison; then the storm closed in again and she was lost from view. 

He saw nothing except trees for a while, but his imagination was full. He was about to be reunited with his mother after an absence of a year. He would not tell her how much he had missed her, for a man should be independent and self-sufficient at the age of eighteen. 

But most of all he had missed Margery. He had fallen for her, with catastrophic timing, a few weeks before leaving Kingsbridge to spend a year in Calais, the English-ruled port on the north coast of France. Since childhood he had known and liked the mischievous, intelligent daughter of Sir Reginald Fitzgerald. When she grew up her impishness had taken on a new allure, so that he found himself staring at her in church, his mouth dry and his breath shallow. He had hesitated to do more than stare, for she was three years younger than he, but she knew no such inhibitions. They had kissed in the Kingsbridge graveyard, behind the concealing bulk of the tomb of Prior Philip, the monk who had commissioned the cathedral four centuries ago. There had been nothing childish about their long, passionate kiss: then she had laughed and run away. 

But she kissed him again the next day. And on the evening before he left for France they admitted that they loved one another.

Follett, Ken. A Column of Fire (Kingsbridge)

I love that he "looked ahead," very poignant. I also really liked the stone angel and that her feathers went "from dove gray to bright white." Also, never knew that a "benison" was a blessing. 

I'm almost halfway through just four days in. Loving every moment. 


Tuesday, December 1, 2020

Didn't Quite Make It

So, with all my prep and outlines and notes and pre-draft writing compiled along with my NaNo writing, I just didn't make the cut off. I hit 45,538 words in November for this novel. Not bad all told, especially when you consider that I had so many other things come up. This, I can say without hyperbole, was the single most busy NaNo I've ever had. This month threw more at me than any other November when I tried NaNo. So, actually, I'm quite pleased with 45K words. 


Why?

Becasue I started editing and rewriting (actually the more critical part of novel writing than the rough draft writing that is NaNo) a NaNo submission I had from three years ago. I wrote it about an elephant sactuary in Africa. A thriller. A complete and utter off the cuff NaNo submission and the other day between classes I started writing it again. It's not bad. I have just over 40K words of that ready to go and ready to edit. It's a great starting place. 

This one too will be a great starting place. I may not  have won but I'm glad I spent the time to get something down. Three or four years from now I'll find this submission and find I have 40K words on it and I'll be able to plug away on it as well. Despite three or four significant folks in my life telling me I was too busy, I'm glad I didn't listen and I took some time to write. 

As Carol Roberts writes in The Dissertation Journey:

“I discovered that my primary reward was not so much the exhilaration of standing on top of the mountain at journey’s end, but rather who I became as a result of the climb.”

What has been the result of my own climb? A better outliner? More understanding of finding time daily to write? 

I had without a doubt the best outline of any NaNo I've worked on. I got my cousin to start wrting his first NaNo submission (see here) . . . how did he do? Remains to be seen. I got three or four folks to give us updates for this blog (see here), which was nice to see. Overall, despite missing it by 5K words, there were some significant wins. I'll build on them for next year!

Saturday, November 21, 2020

Things Have Slowed

Although I was moving right along before (see here) my writing has certainly slowed down now. It's not a complete stop, but it is slower. As of November 20th, here's where things stand.

Why? 

I think I may have the answer to that. I've been stuck working with Anne and Emily on our final push to complete our presentation on emotional intelligence. (For anyone who may question it, I have none, that much is clear).


Regardless, let's see where I'm at:

  • Total words: 24,433
  • Words left: 25,567
  • Words per day: 1,221
  • Words per day needed to complete on time: 2,557
  • Words needed to be a better writer than my cousin Alex: Already there!

Monday, November 16, 2020

Half-Way There Update from Guest Blogger - Shannon

Shannon wrote again and gave an update on her progress. Specifically she wrote: here's my latest update if you'd like to use it. Here's something she may not realize . . . the guest blogger posts are by far the most popular posts I have on this blog! So, of course, I want it!!! - Ergo, here's Shannon's half-way post!

Here we are, halfway through the month of November already, which means we’re halfway through NanoWriMo. If you started Nano with a blank page, you are hopefully moving along nicely and find yourself now at about 25,000 words. Give yourself a pat on the back and a box of chocolates! If you haven’t reached the halfway point in your novel, or gotten as far as you’d hoped, cut yourself some slack. Writing a book while juggling a day job (for most of us) and housework and family and everything going on in the world is not easy! The important thing is that we do our best and keep writing. We all deserve a pat on the back for just showing up and putting pen to paper.


As I said in previous posts, I’m a Nano Rebel. I’m using Nano to finish the 2nd draft of my novel. I started the month 34,876 words into the 2nd draft. Halfway through Nano I’m sitting at the 47,423 mark. I’ve written what I believe to be the last paragraphs, so the remaining 2500 words or so will need to be incorporated into previous sections leading up to the ending. It’s like pulling teeth, trying to find another 2500 words when I’ve said everything I want to say. I know there are things I will expand upon in the next rewrite. Themes and metaphors and imagery and descriptions. All of that still needs to be fluffed out more, and I know that will come in the next draft. Still, I really want to hit that magic 50,000 words before Nano ends!

How about you? How far along are you? What are you struggling with? Let me know in the comments here or on my website ShannonHovey.com I'd love to hear from you!

Wednesday, November 11, 2020

Guest Poster Update - Alex Cole

We have a post from another guest blogger (see the others here). Alex has checked in. I'm glad to see that he's giving NaNo a try and it's coming along. 

I have officially begun the challenge to write 50,000 words in a month. I’ve started writing, but I’m not as far along as I’d like to be. Fortunately, I have plenty in my head to write about. It’s almost as if I’ve been storing away stories and situations and techniques for many years now, and it finally has a place to pour out. My stories seem to be at the forefront of my mind now, which is a nice distraction and a nice escape from daily stresses. 

A few weeks ago, I discovered something that I do in my mind when I have an interesting thought. I’m sure most authors have their own heuristics or peccadilloes that help them conceptualize novels or stories and I am discovering my own even this early in the process. When I have an interesting thought pertaining to my story, I either have to completely process the thought and write it down quickly. If I don’t write it down fast, I will forget it. I also have to completely explore the idea and wring out every usable drop from it. This whole process rarely happens. 

More frequently, an interesting thought jumps into my brain and I have to convince myself to stop thinking about it. I write down the truncated thought then try my best to not think about it ever again until I have time to explore it. If I explore it and can’t write it down, it’ll be gone forever. Then I delude myself into thinking that when I do have time to explore it, I will get from it what I need. I don’t know how this affects my stories, but I will also never know, which is fine by me. Ignorance is bliss. 

I’m curious to hear about other people’s idiosyncrasies when they are writing and how they battle their minds to get the best out of themselves. 


Another Gem from the Wire

Watching The Wire the other day, season 2, and truth be told there isn't too too much that can be quoted. There are more irreverent words and curses every few seconds that it might give Goodfellows a run for its money.

However, there is one that grabbed me almost as much as Bubbles' "thin line between heaven and here" (see here). Bodie asks one of his runners how things are going. The response he gets, and it doesn't phase him as it did me, was;

"Slower than a white man wearing slippers."

Tuesday, November 10, 2020

Moving Right Along

How are things going? Well, they are moving right along (thus the picture below). This was one of my all-time favorites when I was growing up. I had this movie on VHS and watched it hundreds and hundreds of times. I think I wore it out. There was actually static at the bottom of the screen from all the back and forth of watching. And this song, Moving Right Along, was one of my favorites. So naturally, I thought about it when I wrote this title.


So, I did a lot of prep this year and that's what's saved me. I wrote 3500 words on Sunday which is great, but that's all I've written for the week. I've had some other projects going on. Leadership training at work, new large scale project at work, a HUGE project for school, and this week is the week I'm supposed to present for my class on the proper way to budget and manage finances for large programs. So, this past week has been a bear. BUT, as I said, today, I got to sit back and get some great writing in. 

My plan to use dictation didn't work at all. Just not at all. The transcription process was laborious and listening to my own voice for a half-hour to hours on end, not a fan of that. Secondly, the "writing" through dictation just wasn't very good. Why do it if the writing is no good? That seems like a step backward.



How's the writing? What are the scenes like? I like them. I think although it's a bit spotty in terms of the flow between chapters, the chapters themselves are fun to write so I hope that means it's fun to read. Another thing I'm doing is I'm looking for conflict everywhere. If there isn't conflict (both internal and external) then I go back and find some. This poor gal in my novel is gonna be a wreck when I'm done with her! 

So, all told I'm at 20K words thanks to Sunday's writing fest and my prep work. How's that translate to the rest of the month? I think I'm ahead of schedule so that's a first for me I think. Thank god for prepping. 

Monday, November 9, 2020

Guest Blogger for NaNo - First Weekly Update - Shannon Hovey

Following up on last week's prep update (see here), Shannon provides a week 1 update with the below post! Keep up the great work!

Well we made it through the first week of NanoWriMo, amidst political unrest in the states that kept the entire world on the edge of their seats, holding their breath. I know for me, as a Canadian who spent almost twenty years in the states, it was incredibly difficult to concentrate on writing this week. That said, I did manage to make some headway on my work-in-progress.

As I mentioned last time, I’m a Nano Rebel. I did not start Nano with a blank page. At the onset of Nano I was 34,876 words into my 2nd draft. My goal was to finish Acts 1 – 3 during Nano, which would hopefully bring me to 50,000 words. Then I would work on my Epilogue after the Nano frenzy.

I’m really pleased to say I made it to 44,343 words this week, despite being glued to CNN for the better part of four days. That leaves me with 5,657 words to sort for the rest of the month. If I did 9,467 words the first week, it seems likely that I can make it (less than 2,000 words per week for the remainder of NanoWriMo).

Can I do it? Only time will tell!

Those of you who started with a blank page, if you’re struggling to find a path to the finish line, I highly recommend you check out Abbie Emmons on YouTube. She has a plethora of videos explaining every step along the way, and she’s doing Letters from Abbie for the month of November, where you can sign up to receive an email from her every day of NanoWriMo. These letters are encouraging, but also informative, and even though we’re a week in, you may still be able to sign up for the remainder. So if you find yourself lost or just needing a bit of a push, check it out.

In closing, I want to say that for those who think it’s crazy to try to write a novel (even just a very rough first draft) in 30 days, think of this: it takes about 30 days to develop a habit. This is why Nano is so awesome, because it can create habits that continue long after the month of November – habits that successful writers need.

Are you on your way to developing a daily writing habit? 

For a look at all of the NaNo guest bloggers feel free to see (here).

Tuesday, November 3, 2020

Self-Directed Learning

Recently read a list of strengths and weaknesses of adult learning in terms of self-directed learning. I recently wrote a blog post discussing Blanchard's Situational Leadership model and Grow's Stages of Self-Directed Learning (SSDL) model (see here). Grow's Four Stages of a Self-Directed Learning Model (SSDL) espouses a theory of adult development from Dependent, to Interested, then Involved, and finally Self-Directed (2020). Several things about your post in comparison to Grow's SSDL caught my eye.

First, I really liked that almost all of the strengths were balanced with weaknesses. It's an acknowledgment that there are no absolutes and that these statements are not as clear cut as they might seem. However, the strengths that caught my eye were a quote that stated, "Adults are more inclined to seek and acquire knowledge," which was immediately counterbalanced by the weakness "not all adults are ready to learn" among others.

The other strength I read was, "Adults are generally self-directed, life-long learners who have a unique concept of self." This one is where I would argue that Grow's SSDL comes into play. Not all adults are or will make it to that stage of Self-Directed learning. It's incumbent on us as teachers, trainers, and facilitators to model our styles to meet their specific needs at the stage they happen to be in.

It's important as trainers that we model our training to the needs of the student. Just as we as writers need to change our writing based on the type and needs of the reader, and we need to model our leadership based on our employee's needs. If we don't do these things, then we risk not being as effective as necessary.

Teach Thought Staff. (2020). Four Stages of a Self-Directed Learning Model. Teach Thought. https://www.teachthought.com/learning/the-four-stages-of-the-self-directed-learning-model/

Monday, November 2, 2020

Guest Blogger for NaNo - Reina Pennington

Continuing with more guest bloggers, Reina asked if she could participate. She comes with a deep background and an obvious record of success! I can't wait to hear more about her work, and love her list of things to do to get off to a good start!

I I wasn't sure I'd join NaNoWriMo 2020, but today I'm glad I did.  I'm drawing on my background as an Air Force intelligence officer and Soviet analyst to write a novel about the Eastern Front. It was great to spend today back in the Great Patriotic War with Soviet fighter pilots!

I managed to "win" NaNo five years out of the past six. My day job as a teacher is taking almost all my energy this year, but my novel just had to come off the back burner in November. I may be a "NaNo Rebel" in the year of COVID-- I can't commit to 50K this time around--but I can commit to doing a little something every day for a month.  

Here are my three tips for a quick start:

  • Use the Daylight Savings Time shift to your advantage (best for early risers). I stay on the old clock for a week or two for bedtime and rising. That gets me up and writing an hour earlier. That's my NaNoWriMo hour even if there's no other time in the day.
  • Plan & prep. Doesn't matter if you're a planner or pantser -- I'm not talking about your writing project, but your life. Reduce all possible friction that will get in your way. Plan a schedule, carve out those writing hours, and hold them sacred. Prepare your life and your space to keep your writing top priority. Stock up your pantry and freezer, keep a list of quick and easy meals, and/or have a meal plan. If you need a clean desk, shove everything you don't need into a box and hide it a closet until December.  Get whatever distracts you out of your way, and keep whatever helps you close at hand (coffee! Indian Monsooned Malabar for me!). 
  • Rituals, Rewards, and Tools. Ritual draws a line in the sand between writing time and the rest of your life. Light a candle, wear writing-time-only special cozy clothes, use a special mug, whatever makes writing a little more special.  Reward yourself for achieving goals. For me, it's one Sanders Dark Chocolate Sea Salt Caramel for every thousand words I write, and a fountain pen from my wish list for bigger milestones. Use the tools that get you there faster; mine are a Filco mechanical switch keyboard, Scrivener, Aeon Timeline, and the Pomodoro technique.

Good luck with NaNoWriMo or whatever writing you're doing! You can find me on NaNoWriMo as "NUHistorian," or check out my web site at http://www.reinapennington.com.


Friday, October 30, 2020

Guest Blogger for NaNo - Rebecca Hougham

Continuing with more guest bloggers, Rebecca is up. The fourth in the series and she's a veteran of NaNo. Looking forward to hearing more from Rebecca! 

Prepping for NaNoWriMo: Third time’s the charm!

I’ve always loved the written word (and imaginary worlds) since I could read really. I finally made the move to a career in writing about eight years ago, and ghost-write articles for business leaders — but I’m increasingly wanting to write my own content/fiction! 


I'm currently preparing for my third NaNoWriMo. Last year, I only made it to 10k because of work projects getting in the way; in November 2018, both my parents were seriously ill, so I achieved 0 words! However, I’ve just gone freelance, so hoping I’ll have more control over my time this NaNo. (Plus, my social calendar is definitely ‘lighter’ this November!)

My favourite genres to read and write are fantasy, fairy tales, science fiction, gothic horror etc. But, this time, I’m going to try my hand at writing a pure romance — although I am throwing in a dash of gothic-themed mystery for good measure. And, I’m being a bit of a ‘Rebel’ and adapting a short story into a full novel, so I already have about 7k words written. 

To prepare for this change in genre, and NaNo in general, I’m deploying several methods:
  • Researching how to write successful romance — such as reading Gwen Hayes’ ‘Romancing the Beat’.
  • Reading pure romance novels, as well as other genres with strong love stories. And watching tv shows/films with romantic elements.  
  • Merging specific plot structures for romantic novels (e.g. Hayes’ four phrases/five beats) with generic plotting methods (e.g. Watts’ eight-point arc) to create a bespoke plan for my romance/mystery.
  • Signing up for my home regions’ remote write-ins/prep sessions.
  • Even writing this blog is refocusing my mind on what I need to do before Sunday! 
So, with more time, and lots of prep here’s hoping third time's a charm and 2020 is the year for me. Although, I am a ‘Plantser’, and heavy on the ‘Pantsing, so who knows what will happen to the plan during November! 

Good luck to all your NaNoers, whether it’s your first time or you’re a veteran. Find me on NaNoWriMo under R.J.G.Hougham if you want to chat romance or writing in general.





Wednesday, October 28, 2020

Guest Blogger - Linda Rader on NaNo

As a part of the continuing series on guest bloggers for NaNo (see here and here), I got an entry from Linda, unexpectedly, and it's an awesome peak into what it takes to prep for NaNo. I look forward to hearing more about how her journey goes!

If I am going to write 50,000 words for the month of November why not start now in October? That is what I thought last year, 2019, and I started on my wip early and continued through the month of November. This year I started even earlier in October. It is never too soon to build good habits.

My goal is 2000 words a day on a specific story idea. I was successful in writing that much last year, but it was sometimes like pulling teeth to get the words out. My mind just goes down a certain path and comes to a dead end.

When that happens I usually starting writing what if's: “Just supposing I did have something to write about what would it be?”

“Well, it would be a fantastic idea with lots of action.” Or something along those lines is what I reply. All I needed was a jumping-off point to start talking about the ideas in my head. I talk to myself constantly, as many people do, and so I really can simply write for minutes on end. More than 20 minutes at a stretch wears me out and I need to take a minute or two breather.

But “what if” questions help me get over that internal editor who says I have to write something deep, something exciting, or worse of all “Something Original.”

No, you just have to write and all those other things happen in the rewrite. Once I agreed to give myself permission to write badly, on the theory that bad writing is better than no writing at all, I began to produce quantity. Did quality eventually come from that? I'm not sure I have made that goal yet, but at least I am on the path. I have written something. I have started NaNoWriMo in October.


Monday, October 26, 2020

Guest Blogger for NaNo - Shannon Hovey

Another Guest Blogger to follow up from Alex's post last week (see here). Shannon has agreed to give us her thoughts on the upcoming NaNo adventure and keep us abreast of her progress. 

It’s just over a week until NanoWriMo, which means it’s Nano Prep time for all us writers participating this year. For most of us, that means developing your story idea, creating characters, deciding on setting, and making an outline for your plot (if you’re starting Nano with a blank page, check out the Nano site – they have lots of resources and checklists and exercises to help with all of that prep work).

For me, Nano Prep is a little different. I’m not starting a new story with a blank page, so the development of characters, plot and setting is complete (I’m told this makes me a “Nano Rebel”, which is a label I rather like). I crafted my rough draft using the Three Act Story Structure (which I highly recommend). My story is formatted into two sections, both written in the epistolary style. The first part is a series of journal entries taking us through the complete story arc, character arc, and ending with the Resolution. The second part is an Epilogue that is a series of letters (or emails) back and forth between the two main characters. My plan is for the journal entries to be about 50,000 words, and the letters about 10,000 or so. I am deep into the rewrites, so my Nano Prep is basically gearing myself up for a giant push through the month of November - making sure other commitments are as few as possible for the month, organizing notes, and focusing my attention on the upcoming scenes so that when the clock strikes midnight on November 1st, I’m ready to go (okay, so technically I’ll probably be asleep at midnight, but I’ll be chomping at the bit when I wake that morning!).  

So, what’s my NanoWriMo goal? To complete the 2nd draft of the first part of my story (50,000 words). I’m now just over halfway through the rewrites of the first part, giving me a starting point for NanoWriMo of about 25,000 words. With the help of Nano Buddies holding me accountable (and perhaps a weekly check-in here with all of you!) let’s see if I can get to the 50,000 word point with my rewrites by the end of November!  

What are your goals for NanoWriMo? Send me a Buddy Request and help hold me accountable!

(You can find out more about me and my writing at http://shannonhovey.com ) 

Wednesday, October 21, 2020

Guest Blogger for NaNo - Alex Cole

I've been working hard to find some other viewpoints that I can share with my readers for the upcoming National Novel Writing Month challenge that begins November 1. I have found some guest bloggers who have agreed to share their NaNo prep and NaNo writing adventures. 

Earlier this month when I released my compilation of short stories I heard from my Number 1 Fan, Alex Cole (my cousin). Alex has always been curious about writing and has in the past asked about my writing process. I convinced him to try NaNo out and to share his experience with me in blog posts. Here's the first!

This first sample he's sent me belies his capabilities and experience. Having graduated from West Point and served as an officer in the armored cavalry,  . . . not to mention being a new father, . . . he certainly has more than 50,000 words worth of stories in him. I look forward to his next post and seeing what he produces!

Well, I guess this is happening. I am gearing up for my first National Novel Writing Month, which means I have no idea what I am getting myself into. I don’t think I wrote 50,000 words in four years of college. But I couldn’t say no because Dick was so enthusiastic about it. His optimism and motivation are infectious, but I hope he knows that he has to keep me motivated and accountable as the month rolls on. 


 

This type of endeavor is not typical for me. I am a very private person, so the idea of being vulnerable and putting a creation out into the world is terrifying. This will be a growth experience, and I’m already starting to broaden my horizons. 

As I start to brainstorm ideas, I am learning that the things I want to write about are the things that normally excite me. I am an avid military history student and find myself looking to the past for inspiration. However, I’ve surprised myself as well by considering other genres and finding story ideas in mundane things around me that are not my normal passions. 

I have also started thinking about my writing skills, finding my writing voice, coming up with an ideal story structure, character development, etc. I’ve even been asking myself questions like, “Can I realistically and convincingly write from the perspective of a young woman when I need to? Can I write about something I don’t know about? How do I learn to do that? How can I relate and connect to readers that are very different from me?”

I’m certain I am not the first NaNo participant to ask these questions of themselves, so I am in good company. So far, this journey has also brought me some joy and a new hobby to pass the day, which I am thankful for. More to follow.  

Monday, October 19, 2020

Emotional Intelligence 2.0

So, I haven't written much about first lines lately, because as I've said, I'm not reading for fun as much, and who really wants to hear a bunch of first lines from books on the theory of adult learning. But, first lines are still quite important, and I always look for them. 

The warm California sun greeted Butch Conner as he stepped out of his truck and onto the sands of Salmon Creek Beach. It was the first day of a long holiday weekend, and a perfect morning to grab his board and head out for a surf. Most of the other local surfers had the same idea that morning, and after 30 minutes or so, Butch decided to leave the crowd behind. He penetrated the water's surface with long, deep strokes that propelled him away from the pack and over to a stretch of beach where he could catch a few waves away from the crowd. 

Once Butch had paddled a good 40 yards away from the other surfers, he sat up on his board and bobbed up and down in the rolling swells while he waited for a wave that caught his fancy. A beautiful teal wave began to crest as it approached the shoreline, and as Butch lay down on his board to catch the wave, a loud splash behind him stole his attention. Butch glanced over his right shoulder and froze in horror at the sight of a 14-inch, gray dorsal fin cutting through the water toward him. Butch's muscles locked up, and he lay there in panic, gasping for air. He became hyper-focused on his surroundings; he could hear him his heart pounding as he watched the sun glistening on the fin's moist surface. 

Emotional Intelligence 2.0 - Travis Bradbery & Jean Greaves

So, for an adult learning and leadership book, non-fiction, it's not a bad start. And it only gets more exciting when the shark starts toying with him and trying to eat him. Emotional Intelligence is an area that I'm really looking forward to digging into. I read about it years ago, and I'm looking forward to finding out much more. 


Saturday, October 17, 2020

NaNo Prep

 So, I freaked out the other night when I started planning some more for NaNo. Why? Cause I was supposed to find some time this week to write a bit. Did I? No. Why not? No idea. Why's this bad? Cause it's about to get worse.


The past few weeks I've been between classes. I had a week or so off and I wanted to take advantage of that. I failed. That transition time has come to an end, and now I'm looking at the amount of work I have during November and I'm FREAKING OUT!

Additionally, I thought this class ended the first week in January. The professor told us that nope, we would get it all done by the first week in November!!!

Work too is busy. Tons of projects all being run at once with no sight of letting up. Then there's the daily hoi polloi of school for kiddos, soccer for one, clubs for the other, family chores galore, and did I mention I'm doing a running challenge? Thank goodness that's almost over. But the only time I could find for running yesterday was 5:30 in the morning! Guess who was up at 5:30 running in the rain. 

November is a perfect storm of busy. 

I'll get through it. I have a plan. I spend two or three days (sometimes four) driving to work. Each drive to work is one hour there, one hour back. That's a lot of time to listen to music, listen to podcasts, call people, etc. Guess what else that time is perfect for? 

Right! Dictating novels for NaNo. 

I've done my first test. I'm completing the transcription tomorrow. I will say this, there is nothing quite so dorky as composing and writing a novel out loud as you drive. Dork or not, it will get done!!!


Sunday, October 11, 2020

First Lines of Brookfields The Skillful Teacher

 As a continuation of my posts on the importance of and my reading of first lines (see here), I offer this from a recent book I read, Stephen Brookfield's, The Skillful Teacher. 

Passion, hope, doubt, fear, exhilaration, weariness, colleagueship, loneliness, glorious defeats, hollow victories, and, above all, the certainties of surprise and ambiguity; how on earth can a single word or phrase begin to capture the multilayered complexity of what it feels like to teach? Today's college classrooms are more diverse than ever before, and the explosion of online learning and social media has thrown traditional conceptions of college teaching out of the window. The truth is teaching is a gloriously messy pursuit in which shock, contradiction, and risk are endemic. Our lives as teachers often boil down to our best attempts to muddle through the complex contexts and configurations that our classrooms represent.

Brookfield, S. (1990). The skillful teacher: On technique, trust, and responsiveness in the classroom. Jossey-Bass Publishers.

So, just how does one begin a book on becoming a better, more skillful, college professor? I guess the above is as good as any, but the truth is, I just don't think it's that inspiring. Sadly, I didn't find the book itself much better than the first line.

Saturday, October 10, 2020

First Line for Three Days

Lately I've been doing a lot of reading for work, a TON of reading for school, and just a little bit of reading for reviews, absolutely none (well, one) for fun. 

That being said I do get to review a couple of fiction books every now and then and I got to read this one. It took me a second or two to get into it, but when I did I enjoyed it enough to want to keep reading. I am never a fan of the dual perspective or dual POV style, but it was good enough to remark about. 

This is the first line. 

“Damn it,” I said under my breath when I realized I wasn’t going to have the comfort of a companionless flight. I was very much looking forward to reading my book. I did not want to engage in small talk with a stranger. But to my dismay, seconds before the plane door closed, a frenzied passenger rushed in and found his seat—right next to mine. 

I intentionally paid him little attention. I needed to send a clear message right from the start: I am a nontalking flight companion. Sometimes it’s just easier to be unfriendly than to find the energy to converse with others. 

Besides, not being able to get my book read, and therefore not finding out who is responsible for the murder of Janie, a seemingly innocent suburban wife and mother, who may or may not have been having an affair with her best friend’s husband—well, that was unacceptable. 

So, I kept my nose in my book and tried my damnedest to not acknowledge the man invading my space. I did notice, however, his scent. It wasn’t wholly unpleasant. This, unfortunately, was a little distracting, despite my resolve to not let him disturb me. At least he didn’t stink. Yes, that would be worse. I smiled coyly and continued ignoring him.

Wojciechowski, Michael. Three Days (p. 7). Black Rose Writing. Kindle Edition. 

Is it the best first line? Hardly. 

Was it the best book ever? Not even close.

Was it worth reading and taking the time. Eventually, yep.

Friday, October 9, 2020

Gillian and Routines

 So, Gillian and I would NOT get along. 

As a part of my prepping for NaNo I'm reading more about other writers and how they work. I read about Gillian Flynn in the WSJ today. She wrote Gone Girl and is writing Utopia now. So, she's super talented, but it's sad to see that she and I would never, ever get along. 

How do you kick off your workweek? Do you zip down to your office?

I’m not a “zipper” of any sort. My husband and I are very well matched in that he is a morning person, so he gets up with the kiddos, who come barreling into our bedroom. I put my head under my pillow, because some of the best writing I ever do is usually from 11 o’clock at night till about 2. I sleep until about 10, then I amble downstairs; I pretend to be a little sheepish for my husband’s sake—like, “Oh, my gosh. Did I sleep in again?”— then some athletes carbo-load; I definitely caffeine-load. First, I have my bowl of cereal, which is Lucky Charms. That’s my ritualistic cereal. I eat all the marshmallows and good stuff. Then, the sweet milk is left, so I pour it into my coffee mug. It’s the most colorful coffee you’ll ever have. And then, I’m embarrassed to say, my second drink of the day is a Cherry Coke Zero. By about 10, 10:30, my Cherry Coke Zero bandwagon begins.

That's the first question and answer in the series and it only get's worse from there. I don't know how anyone could function like this. I just don't get it. 

My best writing? My best writing comes from a long early morning run or walk with Sadie, followed by a cup of coffee and a computer, with quiet in the house before anyone wakes up. usually this occurs on weekends. Everyone else sleeps in and I get to work on the fun writing. Sometimes it happens on weekdays since Covid started. Lately too, I've been working on weekend afternoons and evenings.

I'm gonna need to up my game some for NaNo. I doubt that just weekends will do it through November, but we shall see. 

If you'd like to see the rest of the article, you can find it here: https://www.wsj.com/articles/why-gillian-flynn-gets-her-best-writing-done-after-midnight-11600691875 or for you that do not have a subscription, feel free to write me and I'll send you a copy. 




Sunday, October 4, 2020

Prepping for NaNo

I'm getting ready for my fifth or sixth NaNo (see here). I actually wrote several of my novels by starting them on NaNo. I'm working on my next novel, a thriller because I wrote it two years ago on NaNo. Who knew I had 60K words in a novel sitting there? 

So, I'm prepping for November in several ways. 

First, in the past I've been a (seat of the) "pantser" not a "planner." These are the two types of NaNo writers, Planners and Pantsers. This year I'm going to be more of a Planner. As such I've started my outline. Here it is so far. 

I've been writing it rather than typing it because I'm still in the brainstorming phase. I've also color-coded it and really fleshed it out far more than I have in the past. Helps to start to generate some momentum. 

Secondly, I'm already getting NaNo Writing Buddies. Two are in the same genre, and about a dozen are locals who I can hook up for writing workshops. I've even gotten my cousin in Washington D.C. Involved so I'll have that bit of impetus as well. 

Finally, I've started promoting this blog on NaNo so I can stay accountable to a crowd. Already I'm seeing almost a hundred more views per day which makes me feel that the marketing and publicity is working. And as you've heard me mention, I'm working on getting some guest bloggers to come in. 

Lately, this blog started to waver off piste so to speak. Lots more Adult Learning and Leadership (see here) which I don't intend to stop, but don't you worry, if you're a writer, there will be plenty on writing coming up in the coming weeks. 


Another Great One

 Recently I got another wonderful review. A few weeks back I wrote about a review I got from a former policeman. He was not someone who wanted to give me a good review, but he grudgingly did (see here). I think I like these reviews from people who don't like my work. 

Thank you KCat. I don't mind at all being compared to Joseph Heller and Earnest Hemingway. I'm happy to hear that. I remember reading lots of Hemingway in high school, in Belgium as a foreign exchange student, and in college. His style never appealed to me either KCat, but Joseph Heller? That's a whole nother issue. 

I love Heller. Catch 22 is one of my faves. Sure there is an ebb and flow that can be tedious, but the writing and the plot, the characters and humor all are superb. I'll gladly let you compare me to Heller.  

It's a tad nerve wracking these reviews. I'm glad I get so many positive ones, but these reviews from folks who don't really like me, they're the best!

Saturday, October 3, 2020

No Fan of the Victorian Era, However . . .

 I am no fan of the Victorian Era, however I have started receiving letters from a little group that sends them out that transport me to that time with some Letters from Sherlock Holmes. 

The group that does this is called "Dear Holmes," (see here) and really it's quite fun. For a long while, I participated in Letter Joy, which sent out representations of famous historical letters once every two weeks. It was really interesting but there was no theme to it all. One week would come a letter about a problem installing cabling in the Chesapeake Bay (turned out to be the first telegraph line or something) the next week a riot in Philadelphia, (a voting rights riot), all quite intriguing but no common thread to link it all together. In fact, in each envelope, there were two letters, and in many cases, there weren't commonalities between the two letters! After about a year I gave up on the historical letters through Letter Joy. 

Dear Holmes at leas provides a little, silly, mystery to solve. The one I'm reading through right now is about a museum curator who is writing to Holmes because of break-ins. I'm on my third letter in this case. I predict the next will be the solution. Then it will all start again. 



It's fun to get something through the mail like this. It arrives, I see it on the kitchen counter, I have to take my time, stop life for a moment, to sit down and think and read. It helps me take a step out of the regular hoi-polloi of life. 

I wish there were serial novellas of the same type. Now that I think about it, I betcha there is. Usually, if I've thought of something, some other enterprising entrepreneur has already done it (see here). A serial novella might have that same consistency of theme throughout that I like from the Dear Holmes letters. I'll let ya know!

Monday, September 21, 2020

Storytelling

We have a series of leadership training classes at the training center where I work. One of these, Speaking as a Leader, is designed to help leaders express themselves to their managers, their teams, and to their clients. What is the point of knowing tools and techniques for effective leadership if you can't effectively communicate to those you may lead? One of the modules within "Speaking as a Leader" is effective storytelling. 


I am a huge fan of storytelling to set the mood, the setting, the tone and to provide an analogy or a handrail that an audience can follow for the rest of the presentation. My former boss was a master at setting a stage in even very dry, formal, meetings around finances and the state of the company with a story that made the audience want to pay attention, listen, and find out more about the rest of the presentation. Since working with him, I've always wanted to master the technique he used so effectively. 

I have however had moments when my stories bombed. It's never a good feeling and usually, the presentation is doomed as soon as the story fails. It's as if with a good story that does the right job the presentation has a chance to be born and grow and mature, but with a bad story the entire presentation is undermined, the foundations cracking and crumbling, and everything comes tumbling down. 

What have I learned about stories? One major rule I've learned is to keep it succinct. I've learned from several failed attempts that if you try to draw out a story, add too much exposition, provide too much detail that doesn't pertain directly to the point, or if you are too tangential, then you run the risk of losing the audiences attention and when you try to transition to the point of the presentation you will have already lost them.

I believe the point of the story should be the introduction, not the first act. A prologue, not a full scene. It should be pithy and pointed and be obvious. The last thing you want is to waste time telling a story that half the folks in the audience get bored with and the other half who listened don't understand how it relates to the point of the presentation. 

I think there is no better way to engage an audience or to create a connection with those you are speaking to than telling a relevant and worthwhile story to catch their interest and allow them to see that what you are about to say may have real-world consequences. 

Thursday, September 10, 2020

Best Review Yet

So, this could be the best review yet.

One of the things that is difficult when writing a mystery is giving the main character a reason to pursue the mystery themselves rather than just turn it over to the police. In the case of Vapor Trail I channeled my little brother. My little brother HATES police officers. I'm sure there's some reason for it, a bad experience or two, friends from high school he didn't like who became police, I don't know the specifics, but in the case of that mystery, I took his approach and had the main character despise the police. Well, that got under the skin of one of my readers.

I do wish I could write to Stephen and let him know that I, personally, love police. I'm very much a Blue Lives Matter guy in today's day and age. Truth is that I have several close friends who have all become police and I like and value the work they do. For several years I worked with a company that provided dash mounted video cameras and I got to see behind the scenes what police have to deal with day in and day out. I even have a concept for a novel about what of the more grizzly scenes I saw. So, I get it, Stephen. I understand the world of police and I support you all.

That being said, thanks for the best review ever. The fact that I had him hating my character but liking my writing says alot. I hope he does read this. Glad he liked the writing.

Tuesday, September 1, 2020

Bubbles

"Thin line between heaven and here."

Because of work, life, and school demands I have not had enough time to read for fun. I have still been writing for fun. In fact, I'm hoping to release a book of short stories soon, so my writing life is still going full bore. And I've started writing this blog again, so if anything, my life has changed positively for writing, but not as much for reading.

Friday, August 28, 2020

Great Reviews

I hope you won't mind a bit of egotism. I've been getting some wonderful reviews (here) and would love to share them with someone. These are all for Vapor Trail (here).

5.0 out of 5 stars Conspiracy theories and murder
Reviewed in the United States on August 13, 2020
A former soldier finds himself dealing with conspiracies while investigating his boss's death. This is another Jack Reacher style thriller and it's done very well! I like a good thriller and this one is very well-written. The pacing is consistent and the characters are great. Hannah has a great writing style that's easy to follow and he wastes no time in throwing readers into the action. It's definitely a book that I'd recommend checking out if you're into this type of story. I'd also recommend it to those who are curious or looking for something different.

I don't mind hearing "Jack Reacher style thriller." I'll take that all day.

5.0 out of 5 stars Military thriller
Reviewed in the United States on August 21, 2020
A well written military thriller with interesting characters (the protagonist took a little while for me to wrap my mind around, truth be told), and a good dose of real-world conspiracy for good measure.  Death, murder, and conspiracy are intertwined and complicated by family ties and friends past and present that keep you guessing and on the edge of your seat.

I enjoyed the intensity of this story and would recommend this book to anyone who tends to read in this genre!  

"Interesting characters" and "good dose of real world conspiracy" . . . those are things I can accept.

5.0 out of 5 stars Nice page turner
Reviewed in the United States on August 9, 2020
This military thriller was quite a page turner. I thoroughly enjoyed it. The book was laced with conspiracy theories yet the plot was well done and easy for me to follow.

"Page turner". . . . thanks! Glad to hear it.

5.0 out of 5 stars Different in a really great way
Reviewed in the United States on August 18, 2020
I have a love/hate relationship with this book. The writing's impeccable while the story just kept on growing and growing on me until I couldn't put it down. It just took me some time to get into the character's head but that's probably me. All in all, I love this story and highly recommend it.

WOW! Impeccable writing! I'll take that all day every day!

5.0 out of 5 stars You'll love this mystery that must be solved.
Reviewed in the United States on August 19, 2020
Vapor Trail by Dick Hannah has well-developed characters and is full of unexpected twists. It provides a unique look into security and military and fitness buffs will enjoy the exercise and running. If you're into Dick Francis or Lawrence Sanders then this is the book for you.

And I'll take "unexpected twists" . . . this is a review I love.

5.0 out of 5 stars A mystery to follow
Reviewed in the United States on August 23, 2020
Very intense with interesting plots. it took a while for me to guess around but very engaging. Great dose for my sunday coffee!

How did they know that I like coffee, and especially sunday coffee so much!

Does an ego good to hear so many good reviews in the past month or so.