Monday, December 21, 2020

Wishing for More from the Marlowe Murders

Some of my favorite stories to read are Agatha Christie whodunnits. There's nothing better than a well thought out, well-formed, compelling, well-thought-out mystery. Every now and then I'll put down the books or the work and I'll go get a copy of the ABC Murders, or Murder on the Mews, or Death on the Nile. I've read most of her stories, so most all the time nowadays I'm re-reading instead of reading. 

I was hoping for a story like that from Laura Giebfried's The Marlowe Murders (Alexandra Durant mystery Book 1). I was not pleasantly surprised. 


I found the pacing off, and the story disjoint and not fun to read. It was tough to care about what was going on and the characters seemed forced. I really wanted to like this book and there were undertones of writing that I hoped would pan out. Sadly, it didn't pan out. There were just enough oddly written phrases and too complex descriptions of setting and characters that I gave up halfway through. 

I'm sorry it wasn't a tad more tightly written because I feel like Laura could have had a remarkably good story. Sadly, it just wasn't this one this time. 

Saturday, December 19, 2020

Book Review of No Place for Mercy

I was eager to read No Place for Mercy by Brian G. Walsh because I've always been a fan of short stories, I grew up with Louis L'amour stories about Bowdrie (see here) and have read all of the short story anthologies of Alfred Hitchcock. Secondly, I've just published my own anthology of short stories and wanted to see how Walsh's stacked up to mine . . . . or mine stacked up to his.


They stack up well. 

Walsh has a way with words and phrasing. His analogies are vivid and compelling. His prose make the ready want to read on. This one about mistakes shaking you like a rag doll got me:

She smiled with nice, even white teeth, probably paid for by her pimp. A beautiful young girl, probably no more than 18. Some day she'd wake up and realize the true cost of making this life decision. She'd learn what Cleon had learned, that some mistakes never let go of you, they shake you like a rag doll until you break, but Cleon wasn't in a lecturing mood tonight.

A very good collection and I enjoyed it very much. 

Wednesday, December 16, 2020

Might Be Looking at Poetry Differently Going Forward

I took a moment to read Across the Room by Shannon Sonnenberg-Pietila and honestly I was quite happy that I did. I am not usually a reader who is attracted to nor am I consumer of poetry, but for Across the Room I might change my views. Simply put the poems are deep, worthwhile, and poignant. 

The title comes from the third poem in the book that might have been the one that hit me hardest. How many times have I seen that person who I wonder what they're thinking? Are they looking like I think they are? And worse is she looking back? How does that change my thoughts on my life? And that makes my thoughts go back to the first poem, the one that ends with the couple sitting on the couch, wondering who will push pause first. 

I read another review that said that the poems lacked polish, but I liked that lack of polish. It provided a harsher more realistic view of life, love, and relationships. It makes me look forward to other poems that might be coming to see how the poet grows, changes, evolves, and develops. 

I'm not by nature a love or poetry, but I loved this book. 

Monday, December 7, 2020

NaNo This Year

 I wrote a few days back about my NaNo journey this year (see here), and how even though I didn’t make it to 50K words, it was still a worthwhile effort in many ways. 

I was reading in Carol Roberts’ The Dissertation Journey the following passage:

You don’t have to write something good initially. Thinking that you do only causes self-disparagement and self-recrimination. Remember, first drafts are only first drafts and are for your eyes only. Let them be sketchy thoughts, rambling sentences, clumsy word patterns using poor grammar, and so on. Just get everything out of your brain and onto paper. Don’t obsess and ponder ideas too long. Don’t judge it, just write it. Getting ideas on paper gets you moving. You now have something to work on and revise. Accept the fact that you will be writing several drafts, and take the pressure off the first one by concentrating only on your ideas. Most writers agree that it’s easier to revise than to create. Writing is a complex and slow process, so don’t expect it to flow effortlessly. Few writers write only when they feel inspired. If you wait for inspiration, or write only when you feel like it, your chances of completion are nil.

Great advice and particularly good considering my own NaNo. Just because I ddin’t hit 50K doesn’t mean what I have written is no good or not worthy. Just wait till I get a chance to rewrite it!


Wednesday, December 2, 2020

A Column of Fire First

 Been a while sine I read for fun. I think the last several books I read for fun were almost a year ago. WEB Griffen books. Finished an entire series. Really enjoyed digging into some military thrillers. Now that my classes for the year are ostensibly done, and although I still have some homework on the schooling front, I'm taking a moment to catch my breath and read for pleasure. 

A couple of years ago someone gave me A Column of Fire by Ken Follett. I've always enjoyed Ken Follett books (see here). Little did I know that A Column of Fire was actually a second in a series about Medieval England and France. I read the first in the series over a decade ago, so it was nice to pick this up and realize I've already read the prequel. The Pillars of the Earth was actually the first Ken Follett book I ever picked up. Since then I've read most of his other books, I've actually read several books on writing where we studied Follett. Overall, A Column of Fire should be just the break I need. 


The first line wasn't especially enthralling, but it was a nice opening scene to create a setting and introduce characters.

Ned Willard came home to Kingsbridge in a snowstorm. 

He sailed upstream from Combe Harbour in the cabin of a slow barge loaded with cloth from Antwerp and wine from Bordeaux. When he reckoned the boat was at last nearing Kingsbridge he wrapped his French cloak more tightly around his shoulders, pulled the hood over his ears, stepped out onto the open deck, and looked ahead. 

At first he was disappointed: all he could see was falling snow. But his longing for a sight of the city was like an ache, and he stared into the flurries, hoping. After a while his wish was granted, and the storm began to lift. A surprise patch of blue sky appeared. Gazing over the tops of the surrounding trees, he saw the tower of the cathedral—four hundred and five feet high, as every Kingsbridge Grammar School pupil knew. The stone angel that watched over the city from the top of the spire had snow edging her wings today, turning the tips of her feathers from dove gray to bright white. As he looked, a momentary sunbeam struck the statue and gleamed off the snow, like a benison; then the storm closed in again and she was lost from view. 

He saw nothing except trees for a while, but his imagination was full. He was about to be reunited with his mother after an absence of a year. He would not tell her how much he had missed her, for a man should be independent and self-sufficient at the age of eighteen. 

But most of all he had missed Margery. He had fallen for her, with catastrophic timing, a few weeks before leaving Kingsbridge to spend a year in Calais, the English-ruled port on the north coast of France. Since childhood he had known and liked the mischievous, intelligent daughter of Sir Reginald Fitzgerald. When she grew up her impishness had taken on a new allure, so that he found himself staring at her in church, his mouth dry and his breath shallow. He had hesitated to do more than stare, for she was three years younger than he, but she knew no such inhibitions. They had kissed in the Kingsbridge graveyard, behind the concealing bulk of the tomb of Prior Philip, the monk who had commissioned the cathedral four centuries ago. There had been nothing childish about their long, passionate kiss: then she had laughed and run away. 

But she kissed him again the next day. And on the evening before he left for France they admitted that they loved one another.

Follett, Ken. A Column of Fire (Kingsbridge)

I love that he "looked ahead," very poignant. I also really liked the stone angel and that her feathers went "from dove gray to bright white." Also, never knew that a "benison" was a blessing. 

I'm almost halfway through just four days in. Loving every moment. 


Tuesday, December 1, 2020

Didn't Quite Make It

So, with all my prep and outlines and notes and pre-draft writing compiled along with my NaNo writing, I just didn't make the cut off. I hit 45,538 words in November for this novel. Not bad all told, especially when you consider that I had so many other things come up. This, I can say without hyperbole, was the single most busy NaNo I've ever had. This month threw more at me than any other November when I tried NaNo. So, actually, I'm quite pleased with 45K words. 


Why?

Becasue I started editing and rewriting (actually the more critical part of novel writing than the rough draft writing that is NaNo) a NaNo submission I had from three years ago. I wrote it about an elephant sactuary in Africa. A thriller. A complete and utter off the cuff NaNo submission and the other day between classes I started writing it again. It's not bad. I have just over 40K words of that ready to go and ready to edit. It's a great starting place. 

This one too will be a great starting place. I may not  have won but I'm glad I spent the time to get something down. Three or four years from now I'll find this submission and find I have 40K words on it and I'll be able to plug away on it as well. Despite three or four significant folks in my life telling me I was too busy, I'm glad I didn't listen and I took some time to write. 

As Carol Roberts writes in The Dissertation Journey:

“I discovered that my primary reward was not so much the exhilaration of standing on top of the mountain at journey’s end, but rather who I became as a result of the climb.”

What has been the result of my own climb? A better outliner? More understanding of finding time daily to write? 

I had without a doubt the best outline of any NaNo I've worked on. I got my cousin to start wrting his first NaNo submission (see here) . . . how did he do? Remains to be seen. I got three or four folks to give us updates for this blog (see here), which was nice to see. Overall, despite missing it by 5K words, there were some significant wins. I'll build on them for next year!

Saturday, November 21, 2020

Things Have Slowed

Although I was moving right along before (see here) my writing has certainly slowed down now. It's not a complete stop, but it is slower. As of November 20th, here's where things stand.

Why? 

I think I may have the answer to that. I've been stuck working with Anne and Emily on our final push to complete our presentation on emotional intelligence. (For anyone who may question it, I have none, that much is clear).


Regardless, let's see where I'm at:

  • Total words: 24,433
  • Words left: 25,567
  • Words per day: 1,221
  • Words per day needed to complete on time: 2,557
  • Words needed to be a better writer than my cousin Alex: Already there!

Monday, November 16, 2020

Half-Way There Update from Guest Blogger - Shannon

Shannon wrote again and gave an update on her progress. Specifically she wrote: here's my latest update if you'd like to use it. Here's something she may not realize . . . the guest blogger posts are by far the most popular posts I have on this blog! So, of course, I want it!!! - Ergo, here's Shannon's half-way post!

Here we are, halfway through the month of November already, which means we’re halfway through NanoWriMo. If you started Nano with a blank page, you are hopefully moving along nicely and find yourself now at about 25,000 words. Give yourself a pat on the back and a box of chocolates! If you haven’t reached the halfway point in your novel, or gotten as far as you’d hoped, cut yourself some slack. Writing a book while juggling a day job (for most of us) and housework and family and everything going on in the world is not easy! The important thing is that we do our best and keep writing. We all deserve a pat on the back for just showing up and putting pen to paper.


As I said in previous posts, I’m a Nano Rebel. I’m using Nano to finish the 2nd draft of my novel. I started the month 34,876 words into the 2nd draft. Halfway through Nano I’m sitting at the 47,423 mark. I’ve written what I believe to be the last paragraphs, so the remaining 2500 words or so will need to be incorporated into previous sections leading up to the ending. It’s like pulling teeth, trying to find another 2500 words when I’ve said everything I want to say. I know there are things I will expand upon in the next rewrite. Themes and metaphors and imagery and descriptions. All of that still needs to be fluffed out more, and I know that will come in the next draft. Still, I really want to hit that magic 50,000 words before Nano ends!

How about you? How far along are you? What are you struggling with? Let me know in the comments here or on my website ShannonHovey.com I'd love to hear from you!

Wednesday, November 11, 2020

Guest Poster Update - Alex Cole

We have a post from another guest blogger (see the others here). Alex has checked in. I'm glad to see that he's giving NaNo a try and it's coming along. 

I have officially begun the challenge to write 50,000 words in a month. I’ve started writing, but I’m not as far along as I’d like to be. Fortunately, I have plenty in my head to write about. It’s almost as if I’ve been storing away stories and situations and techniques for many years now, and it finally has a place to pour out. My stories seem to be at the forefront of my mind now, which is a nice distraction and a nice escape from daily stresses. 

A few weeks ago, I discovered something that I do in my mind when I have an interesting thought. I’m sure most authors have their own heuristics or peccadilloes that help them conceptualize novels or stories and I am discovering my own even this early in the process. When I have an interesting thought pertaining to my story, I either have to completely process the thought and write it down quickly. If I don’t write it down fast, I will forget it. I also have to completely explore the idea and wring out every usable drop from it. This whole process rarely happens. 

More frequently, an interesting thought jumps into my brain and I have to convince myself to stop thinking about it. I write down the truncated thought then try my best to not think about it ever again until I have time to explore it. If I explore it and can’t write it down, it’ll be gone forever. Then I delude myself into thinking that when I do have time to explore it, I will get from it what I need. I don’t know how this affects my stories, but I will also never know, which is fine by me. Ignorance is bliss. 

I’m curious to hear about other people’s idiosyncrasies when they are writing and how they battle their minds to get the best out of themselves. 


Another Gem from the Wire

Watching The Wire the other day, season 2, and truth be told there isn't too too much that can be quoted. There are more irreverent words and curses every few seconds that it might give Goodfellows a run for its money.

However, there is one that grabbed me almost as much as Bubbles' "thin line between heaven and here" (see here). Bodie asks one of his runners how things are going. The response he gets, and it doesn't phase him as it did me, was;

"Slower than a white man wearing slippers."