Tuesday, January 5, 2021

Storytelling for Engagement

Storytelling is key to engagement in so many ways when it comes to teaching classes. I try to use storytelling as an aspect of my teaching often. I think there are few things that help bring a class together than being able to know the history and the background of the teacher and maybe more importantly, vice versa. 

One thing I try to encourage all of my instructors to do is to reach out and promote that the class they are teaching tell their own stories. When I taught field technicians how to work large pieces of equipment I showed up with a wealth of book knowledge and 8 hours to fill. The classes I taught were to field personnel with hours and hours and weeks and years of time in the field on the very equipment that I was trying to train on. I learned quickly that not only should I step back and allow the class to teach themselves, but also to encourage the use of their telling their own stories. 

Quickly we found that the younger technicians really honored and enjoyed hearing the stories from their more senior supervisors. By that same token, the senior supervisors, when hearing the stories and anecdotes from their teams, we're able to add to them, address their issues, and help them. Encouraging the use of having the class tell us their stories really helped make the class more powerful and worthwhile for the class as a whole. 

Thursday, December 31, 2020

Covers, Covers and More Covers

So there was one thing that came out of that last review that I felt compelled to address. Romantic wrote:

To the author, please consider getting a professional cover done. The current one really doesn't do justice to the level of writing in this book.

Although this is a wonderful compliment about my writing, it's not the best compliment about my skills in terms of cover design. When I first started this journey, I tried making my own covers. That came to a screeching end very quickly (see here, here and here). 

In my defense, as a huge fan of Dick Francis, I was trying to mimick his style. They do look rudimentary and cheap though, so I'm glad I decided against using them long term.

It took me a while, but I found an online but when I found the ones I thought were professional, sophisticated and worthwhile, I invested in them, bought them, worked with the designer and rolled them out (see here).

These were far better, but they still lacked something. They looked too blank I realize now. Truthfully, even though Vapor Trail looks homemade, it was actually the most expensive one I bought. I never liked it though. It never truly represented the story. Romantic was correct.


Thanks to this comment by "Romantic" I went back and found a better cover for Vapor Trail (it's not easy by the way) and updated both the other two. I uploaded tag lines, provided some more flare. Now I'm far happier with them. I can live with these. Let's hope "Romantic," thinks the update is worthwhile.



Wednesday, December 30, 2020

Why Writer's Write

So this is why people write! I should get reviews more often. A few months ago I wrote about a review that I got online for one of my novels (see here) and then before that another one (see here). Those two were nothing compared to the two I just got over the winter holidays. I've updated my author page with all of my novels now, and it's fun to see the reviews coming in (see here).

The first one I got was for On the Edge (see here) from Michael Best:


The aspect that really hit me was two things he wrote. The first was about the ability to add depth and richness to the story. 

The author skillfully creates a clash of characters, though adding to the depth and richness of the story, it requires the reader to remain exceptionally engaged without missing a beat. Given the nature of the story, that is not hard to do.

The second quote discusses the allegorical quality applied to the story. Was I trying to do that? Yep. What's funny is that Vapor Trail has a far more sophisticated touch of that than On the Edge. 

Dick Hannah’s book has an allegorical quality to it, in that, Joe Malone is symbolic of today’s war vet and emblematic of the struggles to adapt to civilian life. Leaving the cruelty of war, expecting to find peace and acceptance, becomes an illusion upon return to civilian life for the MC, as is the case in the real world.

The second review was for Vapor Trail (see here) and it's just as fun to read, this one from someone named "Romantic:"



I have to say, it feels good to say that character development was so good. Thanks so much!

Mechanically well done, dialogue exceptional, plot believable and tense (in just the right places)...but for me, it was the character development that really shot this one through the roof.

It feels so good to be recognized for your craft. This must be why writers strive to keep producing. I can tell you this much, reviews like these make me want to write more!





Monday, December 21, 2020

Wishing for More from the Marlowe Murders

Some of my favorite stories to read are Agatha Christie whodunnits. There's nothing better than a well thought out, well-formed, compelling, well-thought-out mystery. Every now and then I'll put down the books or the work and I'll go get a copy of the ABC Murders, or Murder on the Mews, or Death on the Nile. I've read most of her stories, so most all the time nowadays I'm re-reading instead of reading. 

I was hoping for a story like that from Laura Giebfried's The Marlowe Murders (Alexandra Durant mystery Book 1). I was not pleasantly surprised. 


I found the pacing off, and the story disjoint and not fun to read. It was tough to care about what was going on and the characters seemed forced. I really wanted to like this book and there were undertones of writing that I hoped would pan out. Sadly, it didn't pan out. There were just enough oddly written phrases and too complex descriptions of setting and characters that I gave up halfway through. 

I'm sorry it wasn't a tad more tightly written because I feel like Laura could have had a remarkably good story. Sadly, it just wasn't this one this time. 

Saturday, December 19, 2020

Book Review of No Place for Mercy

I was eager to read No Place for Mercy by Brian G. Walsh because I've always been a fan of short stories, I grew up with Louis L'amour stories about Bowdrie (see here) and have read all of the short story anthologies of Alfred Hitchcock. Secondly, I've just published my own anthology of short stories and wanted to see how Walsh's stacked up to mine . . . . or mine stacked up to his.


They stack up well. 

Walsh has a way with words and phrasing. His analogies are vivid and compelling. His prose make the ready want to read on. This one about mistakes shaking you like a rag doll got me:

She smiled with nice, even white teeth, probably paid for by her pimp. A beautiful young girl, probably no more than 18. Some day she'd wake up and realize the true cost of making this life decision. She'd learn what Cleon had learned, that some mistakes never let go of you, they shake you like a rag doll until you break, but Cleon wasn't in a lecturing mood tonight.

A very good collection and I enjoyed it very much. 

Wednesday, December 16, 2020

Might Be Looking at Poetry Differently Going Forward

I took a moment to read Across the Room by Shannon Sonnenberg-Pietila and honestly I was quite happy that I did. I am not usually a reader who is attracted to nor am I consumer of poetry, but for Across the Room I might change my views. Simply put the poems are deep, worthwhile, and poignant. 

The title comes from the third poem in the book that might have been the one that hit me hardest. How many times have I seen that person who I wonder what they're thinking? Are they looking like I think they are? And worse is she looking back? How does that change my thoughts on my life? And that makes my thoughts go back to the first poem, the one that ends with the couple sitting on the couch, wondering who will push pause first. 

I read another review that said that the poems lacked polish, but I liked that lack of polish. It provided a harsher more realistic view of life, love, and relationships. It makes me look forward to other poems that might be coming to see how the poet grows, changes, evolves, and develops. 

I'm not by nature a love or poetry, but I loved this book. 

Monday, December 7, 2020

NaNo This Year

 I wrote a few days back about my NaNo journey this year (see here), and how even though I didn’t make it to 50K words, it was still a worthwhile effort in many ways. 

I was reading in Carol Roberts’ The Dissertation Journey the following passage:

You don’t have to write something good initially. Thinking that you do only causes self-disparagement and self-recrimination. Remember, first drafts are only first drafts and are for your eyes only. Let them be sketchy thoughts, rambling sentences, clumsy word patterns using poor grammar, and so on. Just get everything out of your brain and onto paper. Don’t obsess and ponder ideas too long. Don’t judge it, just write it. Getting ideas on paper gets you moving. You now have something to work on and revise. Accept the fact that you will be writing several drafts, and take the pressure off the first one by concentrating only on your ideas. Most writers agree that it’s easier to revise than to create. Writing is a complex and slow process, so don’t expect it to flow effortlessly. Few writers write only when they feel inspired. If you wait for inspiration, or write only when you feel like it, your chances of completion are nil.

Great advice and particularly good considering my own NaNo. Just because I ddin’t hit 50K doesn’t mean what I have written is no good or not worthy. Just wait till I get a chance to rewrite it!


Wednesday, December 2, 2020

A Column of Fire First

 Been a while sine I read for fun. I think the last several books I read for fun were almost a year ago. WEB Griffen books. Finished an entire series. Really enjoyed digging into some military thrillers. Now that my classes for the year are ostensibly done, and although I still have some homework on the schooling front, I'm taking a moment to catch my breath and read for pleasure. 

A couple of years ago someone gave me A Column of Fire by Ken Follett. I've always enjoyed Ken Follett books (see here). Little did I know that A Column of Fire was actually a second in a series about Medieval England and France. I read the first in the series over a decade ago, so it was nice to pick this up and realize I've already read the prequel. The Pillars of the Earth was actually the first Ken Follett book I ever picked up. Since then I've read most of his other books, I've actually read several books on writing where we studied Follett. Overall, A Column of Fire should be just the break I need. 


The first line wasn't especially enthralling, but it was a nice opening scene to create a setting and introduce characters.

Ned Willard came home to Kingsbridge in a snowstorm. 

He sailed upstream from Combe Harbour in the cabin of a slow barge loaded with cloth from Antwerp and wine from Bordeaux. When he reckoned the boat was at last nearing Kingsbridge he wrapped his French cloak more tightly around his shoulders, pulled the hood over his ears, stepped out onto the open deck, and looked ahead. 

At first he was disappointed: all he could see was falling snow. But his longing for a sight of the city was like an ache, and he stared into the flurries, hoping. After a while his wish was granted, and the storm began to lift. A surprise patch of blue sky appeared. Gazing over the tops of the surrounding trees, he saw the tower of the cathedral—four hundred and five feet high, as every Kingsbridge Grammar School pupil knew. The stone angel that watched over the city from the top of the spire had snow edging her wings today, turning the tips of her feathers from dove gray to bright white. As he looked, a momentary sunbeam struck the statue and gleamed off the snow, like a benison; then the storm closed in again and she was lost from view. 

He saw nothing except trees for a while, but his imagination was full. He was about to be reunited with his mother after an absence of a year. He would not tell her how much he had missed her, for a man should be independent and self-sufficient at the age of eighteen. 

But most of all he had missed Margery. He had fallen for her, with catastrophic timing, a few weeks before leaving Kingsbridge to spend a year in Calais, the English-ruled port on the north coast of France. Since childhood he had known and liked the mischievous, intelligent daughter of Sir Reginald Fitzgerald. When she grew up her impishness had taken on a new allure, so that he found himself staring at her in church, his mouth dry and his breath shallow. He had hesitated to do more than stare, for she was three years younger than he, but she knew no such inhibitions. They had kissed in the Kingsbridge graveyard, behind the concealing bulk of the tomb of Prior Philip, the monk who had commissioned the cathedral four centuries ago. There had been nothing childish about their long, passionate kiss: then she had laughed and run away. 

But she kissed him again the next day. And on the evening before he left for France they admitted that they loved one another.

Follett, Ken. A Column of Fire (Kingsbridge)

I love that he "looked ahead," very poignant. I also really liked the stone angel and that her feathers went "from dove gray to bright white." Also, never knew that a "benison" was a blessing. 

I'm almost halfway through just four days in. Loving every moment. 


Tuesday, December 1, 2020

Didn't Quite Make It

So, with all my prep and outlines and notes and pre-draft writing compiled along with my NaNo writing, I just didn't make the cut off. I hit 45,538 words in November for this novel. Not bad all told, especially when you consider that I had so many other things come up. This, I can say without hyperbole, was the single most busy NaNo I've ever had. This month threw more at me than any other November when I tried NaNo. So, actually, I'm quite pleased with 45K words. 


Why?

Becasue I started editing and rewriting (actually the more critical part of novel writing than the rough draft writing that is NaNo) a NaNo submission I had from three years ago. I wrote it about an elephant sactuary in Africa. A thriller. A complete and utter off the cuff NaNo submission and the other day between classes I started writing it again. It's not bad. I have just over 40K words of that ready to go and ready to edit. It's a great starting place. 

This one too will be a great starting place. I may not  have won but I'm glad I spent the time to get something down. Three or four years from now I'll find this submission and find I have 40K words on it and I'll be able to plug away on it as well. Despite three or four significant folks in my life telling me I was too busy, I'm glad I didn't listen and I took some time to write. 

As Carol Roberts writes in The Dissertation Journey:

“I discovered that my primary reward was not so much the exhilaration of standing on top of the mountain at journey’s end, but rather who I became as a result of the climb.”

What has been the result of my own climb? A better outliner? More understanding of finding time daily to write? 

I had without a doubt the best outline of any NaNo I've worked on. I got my cousin to start wrting his first NaNo submission (see here) . . . how did he do? Remains to be seen. I got three or four folks to give us updates for this blog (see here), which was nice to see. Overall, despite missing it by 5K words, there were some significant wins. I'll build on them for next year!

Saturday, November 21, 2020

Things Have Slowed

Although I was moving right along before (see here) my writing has certainly slowed down now. It's not a complete stop, but it is slower. As of November 20th, here's where things stand.

Why? 

I think I may have the answer to that. I've been stuck working with Anne and Emily on our final push to complete our presentation on emotional intelligence. (For anyone who may question it, I have none, that much is clear).


Regardless, let's see where I'm at:

  • Total words: 24,433
  • Words left: 25,567
  • Words per day: 1,221
  • Words per day needed to complete on time: 2,557
  • Words needed to be a better writer than my cousin Alex: Already there!