This first line, from Diamonds are Forever, is far better than the last.
"With its two fighting claws held forward like a wrestler's arms the big pandinus scorpion emerged with a dry rustle from the finger-sized hole under the rock."
Ian Fleming - Diamonds are Forever
Not bad, and the rest of the chapter is equally intriguing. A long analogy for what is about to happen in the rest of the story? Who is the scorpion? Who is the beetle the scorpion kills and eats? Who is it that eventually stomps on and kills the scorpion? I want to read on.
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