Latest Last . . . Not Much Better than the First

Although there was plenty inbetween that I liked about this book, the first and last lines did not make the list of fun to read parts. A few days ago I posted about this first line, now, done too soon, the last line comes up.

Carlos smiled back at his brother. They were back in business again. 

Bob Mayer - Eyes of the Hammer

So, if the first lines set the scene and the last line closes it, I'm thinking that both of these need to be in the "needs improvement" sub-catagory.

That being said, in a couple days I hope to have my review posted, the book probably won't be in the "needs improvement" sub. Go figure.