These are more that I read recently that called to me (like these HERE). I will tell those of you who like these that yes I write my own . . . yes you've read them . . . yes I have a pseudonym I post under. Can you tell which are mine?
This first one is from LizKyfer and I love it.
I thought I'd survive without you
and I did, no question
but had I known
that was the last kiss
I was to have
I would have lingered longer
spinning out the minutes
trying to engrave the felling
yes, even with you . . .
Ah, that last kiss. Invoke that in any poem and you've pretty much got everyones attention. We all have a last kiss right? One that haunts us!
This next from Moongazer is a good one. Hit me, does it hit you?
I'll stop dying when you start living.
Don't know why this one from JediMasster7 grabbed me, but it did. Glad it did.
how beautiful you look darling, wearing nothing but the moon
HA! Who can visualize this one!
Evershade, evershades , ever shade, ever shades, shades of Betsy
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