HAving read an article regarding query letters written by Anne Rittenburg (?) for Writers Digest, I have revised my query letter, paying particular attention to brevity.
Dear Ms. XXX,
Wynn Johnston finds his ordered, predictable life as an amature triathlete thrown into turmoil when his business partner, Wheeler, is murdered in the seemingly safe confines of the Seattle airport. As Wynn begins to dig into Wheeler's past he finds out that his best friend was involved in a conspiracy that puts Wynn's life and his friends lives in danger.
Toe the Line is a 73,000 word cozy mystery in a mold similar to Dick Francis or Ellen Crosby, but with a theme that revolves around adventure racing instead of horse racing or wine making. Including a feisty female main character who is the impetus behind the action, scenic settings from the Pacific Northwest, and an insider's look into the life and training of a triathlete, this novel provides an intriguing adventure while opening new worlds to readers.
I have been a technical writer and editor for over ten years and have worked as a fitness consultant and athletic trainer since the mid 90's. I look forward to hearing back from you sending my complete manuscript.
Sincerely,
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